Take a break!!

Everyone should take a break..

Komal Mittal
07 Mar, 2020 • 1 min read • en
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Take a break!!

From frustration, failure and heartbreak,
Oh man!! Come on take a break..

It's your life not a puppet show,
To show the world don't lose your glow,
For failures don't shed your beautiful flakes..
Oh man!! Come on take a break..

You're strong you're fierce,
No one can challenge your determination so sheer,
Take time and heal all of your ache,
Oh man!! Come on take a break...

The world is an endless rat race,
But you have to be consistent on your pace,
Don't let the world take your life's stake,
Oh man!! Come on take a break...

To enjoy your life to the fullest,
To overcome all the problems even the hardest,
Try rectifying rather than repenting on your mistake,
Oh man!! Come on take a break..

Life is full of insecurities and grievance,
To get success just never leave your allegiance,
But in this race never take yourself forsake,
Oh man!! Come on just take a break..

From everything that gives your inner self a brake,
Oh man!! Come on just take a break..

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